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Z-Axis, 25 Nov 2006 05:03 pm

Look, a new comic! Here's the second one. I'm a bit worried about overuse of onomatopoeia, and I think some of the panels are a little lacking art-wise.

Constructive criticism would be wonderful.

red157, 25 Nov 2006 05:29 pm

Constructive criticism? I guess length is an issue (Bit longer?), but the art is wonderful.

Elfei62, 25 Nov 2006 05:29 pm

My Thoughts I think it looks great.

Z-Axis, 26 Nov 2006 04:53 am

Thanks! Thanks for the kind words :D

I'll try a longer one for the next one.

Verity6 (Guest), 26 Nov 2006 09:54 am

well... well, i think your camic lacks in the 'wow' factor a bit, shall we say cheap...




only joking brother! excellent! excellent!!! couldn't be better!

george

Commisiar (Guest), 27 Nov 2006 06:50 am

really good looks great mate

Apelord69 (Guest), 27 Nov 2006 07:25 am

Anonnomatawha? What th heck dos annonnomatopia meen?
also did u use he spel chekere?

Z-Axis, 27 Nov 2006 09:44 am

Onomatopoeia? http://www.hyperdictionary.com/search.aspx?define=onomatopoeia
Sorry, my writing tends to be sesquipedalian. I don't think Inkscape has a spell checker, any glaring errors you observe?

CorruptHardware: Thanks for the criticism, I may put another version up later with that speech bubble changed.

Verity6/George: Thanks :D
Commisiar: Thanks :D

Z-Axis, 28 Nov 2006 03:18 pm

Hmm... Do you think the speech bubble would work if I changed the full stop to a comma? Similar to the current version, but not quite so strong.

Thinking on that, it wouldn't work. I think I'll leave the comic as-is, but I'll bear the criticism in mind if I make a similar comic in future.

Rutskarn (Guest), 31 Jan 2009 04:39 pm

2 The understated, "Ow" in the last panel made this one.

t1868 (Guest), 03 Feb 2009 03:31 pm

if they exploded then why ar ethey walking around the ship in the next episodes???? chew that one over.

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