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Z-Axis, 23 Nov 2006 01:52 pm

Hi all! I hope you enjoy En Guard. Read the newspost for further information.

Feedback would be most desirable.

Pac20041234 (Guest), 24 Nov 2006 04:13 am

well done Z-axis, this is really great, everyone else should bow down to your superior creative skills. make the next bit, I want to see what happens!!

Apelord69 (Guest), 24 Nov 2006 06:54 am

Cheese Z-axis, i am sooo hungry,

Z-Axis, 24 Nov 2006 11:09 am

Thanks for the comments CorruptHardware: Thanks for the comments, it is somewhat inspired by the Order of the Stick, that sort-of breaks the fourth wall in its first comic too. Any advice to improve it (apart from not repeating the 4th wall thing for a while)?

Pac20041234: Thanks :)

Apelord69: Eh???

Pac and Apelord are RL friends, if anyone is interested.

red157, 25 Nov 2006 05:18 pm

Very nice First panel made me chuckle, which is always good.

Guest, 15 Dec 2006 12:13 pm

Waht's the fourth wall? And how many are there?

Z-Axis, 16 Dec 2006 11:31 am

The Fourth Wall Sorry your query remained unanswered for so long, but the fourth wall is the imaginary wall between the characters and the audience, based theatre/images where a room would have an imaginary, invisible, fourth wall in addition to the other visible three around the actors.

The term breaking the fourth wall means the characters acknowledge they are in a work of fiction, be it film, play, comic, or possibly even book.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fourth_wall

I broke the fourth wall in the first two panels with the comments on the space scene.

Mr_Dave, 11 Nov 2007 11:27 am

OHMYGOSH! hahah yugioh GX broke tyhe fourth wall XD
"I have been carrying this for three episodes!"

Rutskarn (Guest), 31 Jan 2009 04:38 pm

1 Only thing that's a bit confusing is how the word bubbles in the bottom left panel overlap. It's not immediately clear who's speaking in the last one.

Then again, a.) this is your first page and b.) I've mucked around with comic layouts enough to know that word bubbles are vicious bastards that ruin everyone's fun.

t1868 (Guest), 03 Feb 2009 03:30 pm

seems lil bit like star trek 2.0. all we need are red shirts....and william shatner.

nikolas (Guest), 19 Jun 2009 12:51 am

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